Personal Logo
Mystilik | Mon, 10/20/2014 - 14:57
Brief from client
This is a personal logo for myself.
Took some of the opinions into mind, and helped fix it up a bit, but I still like the scroll/ribbon shape it creates.
Hope my kerning is better this time around.
4 Comments
this is better than before i think. now a single letter can express 2 letters l and d . that's good. but probably your typography has a small problem. Look, L. Design is less bold than your letter type logo. i think it should be better to make 'L. Design' bolder than logo.
I really like the way you made your symbol, using the ''L'' as a "D". Only thing i recommend adjusting is your typography as it doesn't go well togheter with your symbol in my opinion. You've also made a interesting choice when it comes to colors, but it'll probably look good if you've got a solid matching branding style. Other than that, good job.
The main problem with your symbol is that since is supposed to be a cursive character (well two, in fact) the down strokes should be thick while the up stroke should be thin. That what gives a good cursive it's grace and subtlety. Unfortunately, yours does exactly the contrary!
If you can fix that, maybe this logo would look better. That being said, I'm still not a fan of L & D merged together.
Thank you and I do see what you mean by the cursive but I was really going for a stylized version of cursive in my own sense, and something I pleased myself as this is a logo for myself and reflects me.
Nevertheless, thank you for your opinion on the matter, always looking for ways to improve myself.