All Men's Space
Waffles | Thu, 10/13/2016 - 19:00
Brief from client
All Men's Space (In Space!) is my latest novelette. I am trying to capture the feel of the logo of the parodied game... not that I am parodying anything in particular. Nope! Not me. Completely not based on anything!
This logo was by far the easiest of the series to make. I will be adding (In Space!) under the logo at some point.
Any thoughts would be useful. Not sure how to improve it from this point, but anything you got would be handy.
19 Comments
I think it's sexist.
=)
A legitimate joke concern! :) It is a play off the parody title, and also something that... happens... in the story.
There are actually three women in this short story, and only one gets eaten alive by lobsters. I'd say that's a pretty good representation of the kickassier sex for a short story that is really about dudes banging each other. :)
lol well it sure as hell sounds interesting!! But dang, how big are these lobsters???? lol
(as for critique I also think it's good work- subtly different, but still similar enough to get the reference)
They are lobster-squirrels, so they are quick on their claws. Just regular sized lobster-squirrels mind you, but when an entire shoal/dray is coming for you, it would be dangerous.
I think I need you to start each of my days with a "waffle-quip-of-the-day" !!! lol
I don't have a Quip of the Day Calendar yet, still only have up until March 19th quipped. That is such a hard day to quip right...
However, I do have promotional copies of most of my books and I will happily give you one if you wish! (providing you are of age, and into that sort of thing!)
;)
Heck yea! =) .....is it going to make me blush? lol
I will email you info.
And yes. Yes it will.
That deal is open to anyone cool, btw.
Sweet!
Sweet!
There you go, breaking the site again!
Sorry!
It's worse than sexist because it assumes the gender of whom all the space belongs to! =)
More seriously, although this qualify more as a simple title than a logo, this is looking pretty good! Nice play with the font, without making a mess out of it. The scify feel is there alright.
What is this story about? Kinky elvish sex in space? =)
Good job, Mr Waffles, a work of you is good.
The original title is just as sexist... maybe... no one owns it... uh, as opposed to everyone... you know, I don't know which is sexiestier. Well, the female characters have a higher live/die ratio than the guys in the story, so they really do fair better. (33% vs 28%)
Thank you Shawali. This story is about all your space. It belongs to us.
:D
... Okay, actually you are 100% right. This one is legitimately about kinky space elf sex in space.
This reminds me of No Man's Sky!
https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/6/67/No_Man's_Sky.jpg
We know, lol. That was the intent.
I guess I succeeded in my goal!
Thanks! :)
Ahh I'm sorry then! xD
The guy who talked is not here anymore )(
;)