App Bee

Well those wings are a little small- kinda throwing the whole thing off. But i must say you're doing better with pairing fonts to your symbols! Good for you! The phone is off-scale a bit too. So it makes the idea look "forced" if that makes sense. I like the style of your illustration- but it's gonna need more work. Good start though.

i like the concept overall, but you need to consider this at small scales. when this is only 100 pixels wide, with that many colors and small details, you wont be able to register anything, it needs to read as a two color positive negative. i think you can achieve a clean icon that uses the same concept you have here, just a more refined execution. i especially dont agree with the third color in the blue.

Way too complicated. Too many elements going on and as said in the comment above, in a smaller version, the symbol won't recognizable.

What if you made the phone solid and the app rows alternating black/yellow? That would simplify it a bit.

This logo has a capacity to become memorable. You have to work on that.

The concept is great, it just needs a better visual production.

All parts of the concept are there, the problem is when you put them together.

I can see the mobile device but there are to many "app icons", that many may not be necessary.

The wings look like leaves. Plus they also look like butterfly wings, they do not resemble a bee's wings. Try to mimic a bee's wings shape.

The shine on the side isn't necessary if you ask me.

The antennae make me think of a ladybug, not a bee.

The colors are great except for the blue of the wings.

You are in the right path, with the concept in place is a matter of exploring a little more which is the fun part of logo design :)

Good job.

This has a lot of potential, it's just too complex. I'd move the square button number down to four, and the bee stripes down to 4 or five -they they both would be enlarged...

Not sure why the wings are blue? it's distracting. make them yellow or brown maybe, and enlarge them? maybe even bring their number down to 2 wings total. They don't have to be anatomical, just enough for us to know they are wings.

Try to use golden ratio to scale those elements, Well made though.

Thanks for all the comments i am work on this logo and update it very soon

Also, think hexagons instead of squares. Honeycombs are six-sided, not four. I know those are supposed to be buttons on a phone, but people most readily associate bees with hexagons.

I agree with those who suggest there only be two colors and that the buttons on the phone portion be simplified. Also: if this is meant to be a bee, where is its stinger? Perhaps it could stick down dividing the "App" and "Bee" words.

It's a very complex picture, move the bee to become better. look here: www.beeline.ru Bee can be made much easier ;)

Too much colors in the bee, simplify the bee.

I like the yellow version. Coool