Arnesto Hardjo Production
stillhp | Sun, 12/25/2011 - 07:58
Brief from client
AH Production is Arnesto and Hardjo. we provide Music and Photo for any kind event such as Product Launching, Wedding, Gathering, Birthday Party, Usher, Other Party, etc.
7 Comments
i think the idea is not good and the execution is bad...even the "a" is close to be a "d", i think you should drop it and start over..
yeah, sorry..
unless you are selling jumbled bloody type- this isn't working.
It makes no sense what so ever.
That blood splat has nothing to do there unless you are also a forensic photographer (in which case it would be unnecessary).
The colors combination and the typeface reminds me of a High school logo.
not a fan sorry
Nothing works here, back to the drawing board.
This whole design needs to be revised sorry. I see what you are trying to do by the positioning of the letters as a creative element but I feel that you can do more. Draw some mock up designs and try to think what you are trying to portray through the actual logo.
Mess around with it in black and white and then add a relevant colour palette to it after. I would like to see your your revisions. :-)