I made the logo personal for me, just for fun
Without a brief, its quite hard to actually critique this logo. I'm not sure what you do or the audience you're going for.
Idea wise, it seems pretty cool. Gives me gamer vibes.
Globally, it needs some tweaking. A lot of the edges and nodes need some love, particularly around the eyes. Go in with your white area tool and smooth tool and clean some of that up.
Also, this looks very close to an angry version of the Discord logo, hence why I'm probably getting gamer vibes
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