Bitte Baby Powder

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geracao ideias | Sat, 04/28/2012 - 02:54

Too many different fonts. Color is not the most accurate. There is an imbalance between the word BITTE and the rest of the logo. Try again please.

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Alpreacher | Sat, 04/28/2012 - 04:46

Ok, have a look at "Johnson's" baby powder. They use 2 fonts: 1st for logo and 2nd for words baby and powder. "baby" is written in bold italic, "powder" is written in plain italic. They use something like navy blue on all fonts. Have a look at that on the net or at home if you have a "Johnson's" jar. You don't have to necessarily copy that, but you surely can take some lessons.

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Arthur Mamou-Mani | Sat, 04/28/2012 - 13:00

I like the baby typo but I would write the other text in a basic font. Having too many fonts is too heavy, keep it simple! The colour is really bad, is there a colour that is baby-like? Maybe a skyblue ?

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Abbas Naqvi | Sat, 04/28/2012 - 21:26

no dear try something else

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STKJohnboy | Mon, 04/30/2012 - 12:05

I don't mine the colours. Too many fonts. The main problem is Bitte looks incidental and not important. Baby powder is only the product, it should be in one font and much less prominent than the company name. After all, Bitte might make other stuff too, if not now then in the future.

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tazmanean_devil | Mon, 04/30/2012 - 15:58

Start over.... Too many things to comment on. Best to brainstorm again.

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Stephen Fitzgerald | Mon, 04/30/2012 - 17:06

yea there are some things wrong with this logo i would start "fresh"..
Get it fresh.. .like a babys bottom... baby powder.... ill be here all week!

there is to many effects you are placing on this logo. too many fonts. the logo does not seam balanced. and the purple is... ehhh... i would suggest starting over.