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BNGSA Rage

Brief from client 

Art for our custom softball uniforms

Concept from customer supplied sketches for their new logo and custom jerseys

6 Comments

signfx22's picture
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Great work!!
Would only suggest separating the R & the A a hair more so the black isn't welded together like the other letters. I really like the colors you chose too.Maybe also a thin black outline to join eyes to logo. Symmetry for 2 inside letters.

Cheers,

Dan-0

G13Design's picture
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Since you are working from the customer sketch, it was probably a clean up job. I would clean this up a bit too though.

I am assuming the letters are hand-made? I would work on the symmetry of the bottom. I would also try it with out the eyeballs coming over the letters.

IMHO-

jesus duenas's picture
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me gusta, i like it

splashster's picture
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It may be an interpretation of your customers sketch but I don't think this will work (probably not your fault, since it's clients idea and sketch). Your execution leaves a lot to be desired, it's pretty bad and the main problem is that this all looks like a giant spider crawling over word 'rage', eyes just don't work like this.

botw's picture
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I think it works, but you need to work out the details.

luenib's picture
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From the distance those crazy eyes look like antlers.

Why don't you blend those eyes inside "RAGE"? I can see it.

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