Art for our custom softball uniforms
Concept from customer supplied sketches for their new logo and custom jerseys
Would only suggest separating the R & the A a hair more so the black isn't welded together like the other letters. I really like the colors you chose too.Maybe also a thin black outline to join eyes to logo. Symmetry for 2 inside letters.
Since you are working from the customer sketch, it was probably a clean up job. I would clean this up a bit too though.
I am assuming the letters are hand-made? I would work on the symmetry of the bottom. I would also try it with out the eyeballs coming over the letters.
me gusta, i like it
It may be an interpretation of your customers sketch but I don't think this will work (probably not your fault, since it's clients idea and sketch). Your execution leaves a lot to be desired, it's pretty bad and the main problem is that this all looks like a giant spider crawling over word 'rage', eyes just don't work like this.
I think it works, but you need to work out the details.
From the distance those crazy eyes look like antlers.
Why don't you blend those eyes inside "RAGE"? I can see it.
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