Box Creations

"Box" has a major kerning problem. The "Box" text with the box symbol that says "Box Box" seems redundant. I see two separate ideas going on at the same time. Keep working to make the whole thing cohesive.

Yeah, with that kerning, I read "Bo X"

And as 45454054media said, having the same word repeated three times is a real drag.

too much "boxes"!

Porque vc não procura "brincar" com a ideia da caixa? Nestas suas propostas a palavra Box aparece repetida sem ter a necessidade disso. Procure usar a forma da caxa para criar algo verdadeiramente criativo e brilhante.

I agree about the terrible kerning and about not wanting to see "Box" three times in a row, but I'll also add that I'd take off all effects. This includes the gradients on both text and the symbol, the odd/uneven stroke on the main text, and the reflective effect on the box.

I guess if it were me, I'd be starting over fresh. This looks kind of tired and boring. It's all the same color, the composition is lacking, the kerning is really bad, and there are too many effects applied.