Bridalville

I like it. But the tag line will have no reading when reduce.

I like the main typography but the tag line is not legible, contrast in colors is ok but the typography does not match to the concept and makes it look very straight, try changing the font, size and place of the tag line

No idea. Start over fresh.

I agree with all of the above. The typography of the main name is not girl-y enough. Try again. A wedding has flowers, not leaves ... but then, depending on your typography, you may not need it. If you add the tagline, make it legible when it's reduced to about 1" wide. Lose the box it's in.

My advice is to really listen and reflect on the comments, everyone is bringing up great points... Why did you choose leaves? The wedding day should be "Magical" so the logo should reflect that. The Tagline needs some work; once it is reduced down all you will see is a pink box with a white line in it lol. Lose the box perhaps. I think if you take the "constructive critisim" you will get an amazing magical logo.

Take Care!

i don't see anything that deals with bridal here, scratch this and start over

Maybe just start over

I quite like the font. As its chunky maybe try it in white with a thin black border. Otherwise all black. I agree on losing the leaves. Maybe instead surround the text with ribbons or confetti, or both! Hey, why not? Nothing says tacky quite like a wedding.

neon