Closing Time Charleston 2

Out of the three versions you posted, I like this one better, because it's the simplest. But I think you can simplify it even more. Don't hesitate to use very basic shapes that gives the ideas of house and time.

Do you have to keep that pineapple thingy on the left? It puts the whole thing off balance without bringing anything to the plate. It also kinda adds a second symbol, which complicates things.

You have three different fonts there. It's one too many. Same here, keep things simple by using only two complimenting fonts.

Watch out for details: the tip of the roof isn't properly centered, so is the little hand in the clock. You're also missing a stroke on the left, just below the left side of the clock.

Finally, keep your strokes consistent by giving them the same thickness.

Nice color palette!

Keep it up!