Connected HR (revised option 3)
like the idea of how u made the H letter, but u need to use another color for it, cos grey makes it look like a road..
the font is very poor and using small letters all the way doest work well from my point of view..
Much better than before with the shadow on the H, I also think the colours are not right. The R should be like the H otherwise it reads: connected R.
Maybe not grey too.
Hello arthurmani, even i was thinking the same R should me same as H let me try :) also if you can advise for the coloring that will be great
Abbas my friend, once again you make a great job, but it will be always the same problem... i think that when you have to reduce, all the great details of the silhuette will vanish.
same idea with CAPS
i think this one is a lot better. it looks more solid and the human silhouette are given emphasis by the blue color. very good.
much much better... i like this color combination
same idea with CAPS & different color combination
geracao dude i already check on business card size icon comes very clear even in the digital print and i am sure offset print will be more sharp n clear
same with some changes
Much better...!! try with other combination of colors...!
I would give a thumb down for the faces but it only my opinion. Try to keep them simple but very accurate, yours are going complex and it might be a printing or understanding problem at smaller scales.
I really like the progress here. The grey with a blue H works better, in my opinion. I still think you should add some weight to the R to keep it slightly more consistent w/ the H & read more clearly "HR"
I don't know that "H"... maybe another style without changing the concept.
I don't like those faces on "H" in any rendition. Is there any other more subtle way to say about connectedness? Or maybe I am too much a perfectionist.
I think this revision needs to stay with the difference of the HR disctintion, I will make the H and R the same type of graphic element, so the HR can be distinguished as a different part of the logo, but everything else just leave it like it is, excellent logo.
I like the idea! I should make the 'R' the same typo as the 'H', bold style
I agree that the R in bold might work better? Maybe?
While "CONNECTED" looks okay in all CAPS the lower case version has a certain appeal as well. A bit more calming or understated. Less confrontational and more reassuring at the same time for an HR company (if that is what this is). The H and the R should share the same color. Over all though I like the design concept.
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The designer has had a great idea, which is smart, likeable, etc. you name it. Also a potential customer will probably like it, after a bit of explaining, leaving it as a piece of "good guy" advertising, or design, means customer likes it after having being explained the lot, and says "good guy" to the designer.
Problem is, the "H" still looks like two trumpets or machine guns, or whatever. If it is supoosed to work then maybe as two identical, very basic faces.
Probably it will never really work, therefore I suggest just abandoning the wonderful idea. Maybe, experiment doing the "connected" or "HJR" bits in a contrasting font type situation, such as the HR in something like Impact/Hattenschweiler". or vice versa.
I do not wish to fail whatsoever to express my immense respect for the grandiose originality of the "H" with the two faces. I love it. However, it does not really work in my very personal opinion and I am really sorry about it.
The H with the faces It might work better a a single item without additional lettering for some type of social services or something to that extent.
creo que se ve muy denso debido a la gran cantidad de letras. Si tomamos elemento por elemento de manera individual luce grandioso: La HR con los rostros, el nombre en azul, y el slogan (si es que puede llamarse de esa manera), pero todos juntos vuelven un conjunto muy denso, lleno de muchos bits de información. Individualmente el color me parece bien aplicado lo que marca separaciones entre los elementos principales del conjunto.
Yo pienso que has aplicado muy bien conceptos básicos de diseño de manera individual para cada uno de los elementos constitutivos, pero insisto en que el ensambe final o su layout no fue el mas apropiado.
I like the versions i have seen this time around.
as for the cant see the faces i just think those people lack a great amount of imagination as soon as i look at the logo i see the male and female faces... i like it. you do have a wonderful idea.
Good one, I like the improvised all caps version. also make the font and weight of R look like H so that HR can be read as one.
The Faces in the H make it a little confusing but if you make HR as a unit that should be addressed.
Try looking at the logo in smaller size and see if the faces are clear.
simply saying it just looks similar to NOKIA logo.same background and font as NOKIA logo has..
These scores are for the black version
the symbol maybe change more abstract, the color change the blue to green turkey and the typography use HELVETICA or Garamond
a good idea!