copyspot
spesantez | Mon, 04/11/2016 - 00:05
Brief from client
Copyspot is a print and copy shop that aims to serve some coffee and give internet access while customers wait for their orders.
impresiones internet copias café (the text below the image) is:
printing jobs, internet, photocopies, coffee
5 Comments
I don't like how the cup and paper are crammed next to the type. The paper looks too thick and rounded too.
Give it more interesting type, Arial Bold Italic makes it feel generic and dated.
Needs a bit more time and effort overall. Good luck.
All good points by Killswitch. I'm not sure if you drew the coffee/cup image or it's clipart but either way I like it. I would like to see the box around your type removed.
Way too complicated, too many elements, the composition is way to tight.... This is not working unfortunately.
you should make this more simple :) i agree with killswitch you should find a better font (isn't arial black?) and maybe rework on the bottom text....a box doesnt look great in a logo
Thank you very much for your critique.
I changed everything, and also the name and slogan was changed. Now is ofispot, and the slogan is: "Work, print, and get some coffee"