Cory's Propaganda
Cory's Oyster | Sun, 04/17/2016 - 08:53
Brief from client
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I am toying around with logo making and I wanted some constructive criticism if anyone has anything to add, Please ignore the difference in shades of black, the color profiles weren't added, the final version shows all blacks at the same level. Thanks for your time. - Cory
2 Comments
It has potential but it needs some major tweaking.
First and foremost, I just can't read the hand lettered word. You need to fix tthat.
Also, there's a lot of things going on, which could work if everything wasn't so crammed.
I'm not a fan of the stars on the ribbon. Usually, this where you would put the name of the brand. The way you done it, the stars overpower everything else in the hierarchy of information.
This may be just me, but there are a lot of pointy ends in this badge. I find it a tid bit too aggressive.
Keep it up!
Thanks for the helpful advice! I like how you mentioned a hierarchy. I am going to try to apply this system to my layers in their proper order. Much appreciated.