I would work something with color ... look for examples of microsoft.
I know you are going for a rough and rugged feel... but, there is a better way to go about it. Right now it looks like something that has been photocopied until it got to this degraded point. I actually think this would look great if were really clean.
Is that a guy climbing? What's the connection to the brand? I don't like the treatment either.
How is this related to computer science?
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