DAWNVILLAGE
viixsa | Wed, 04/03/2019 - 21:22
Brief from client
a Premium Student Living
Create a logo that talks to students from all walks and ethnic background. it should show what we stand for (People, Community, Love and Academic Excellence)
3 Comments
I think your idea is good, but the symbol became too complicated. Try to remove elements, reduce the number of items, and keep the concept. The symbol will look more iconic.
The tagline won't work. It's too fancy, thin, and small. It will literally disappear on a business card.
Thank you for your input on this. Let me try to work on your suggestions.
The symbol isn't terrible, far from it, but it looks very generic to me.
The bold/regular thing happening with the font isn't working, as the contrast between the two words is way too subtle.
I agree with Ivan on the subtext. It feels totally disconnected from the rest of the logo.
Colour wise, this is pretty good.