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DeGraaf logo

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My name is Denny. I am a secondyear student mediadesign. I hope you can give me some feedback on the logo I made for myself so I can make it better.
thanks for the help.

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dennisboekhout's picture
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I do Like the idea of the logo, but I can't seem to find a connection from the logo to the text below it. The colors dont seem to be equal.

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Try another font, maby someone like: Caviar Dreams, Bebas etc.

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Sorry, this is not working for me.

It looks like a very generic logo for an IT company or something. It definitely lacks some kind of human touch, as well as some inspiration and more importantly: sketching (the most important part of the creative process).

The oversized symbol is also killing the word mark. You have to find a right balance between the two. It's also better to leave some white space around the logo so it's not so "in your face" when you present it =)

The choice of font is nice, but that's pretty much it.

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I agree with Shawali mostly about the 'oversized symbol'. 50% will be more than enough. The colors of the Typography and the Symbol doesn't match well (like Dennis said).

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