Dengo's Beer
maaarcoliveira | Tue, 08/11/2015 - 20:21
Brief from client
Dengo's Beer is a drink store. They wanted something simple and that represents some of their favorite drink (beer) and friendship..
ps: i dont have a perfect english, so its possible that may have a mistakes in this "text"
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3 Comments
Hello-
I think your idea is headed in a great direction for what the client has asked for- my only suggestions are:
1- lighten the color of the beer a bit, the orange is a bit dark even for dark beer. Maybe a golden color?
2- Make adjustments to the lines above the mugs. They look a bit like eyebrows! and concerned eyebrows at that! haha so maybe a half circle shape to hint at the round rim of the mug.
I enjoy the typography. I think you have a good start here! =)
hey man, thanks! i didnt even see the eyebrows hahaha, i'll make some changes and i'll post it here again
Firstly, if you decided to make a lower case text - then " R " in " beer " needs to be uniform with other letters. Secondly, I, too, have noticed eyebrows at a first glance and that needs to be taking to consideration - unless you're creating a face out of the two tilted beer mugs. Thirdly, I would only outline " d " , " b " and the rest of the elements that related to a beer mugs except a liquid to give that glassy effect. In my opinion a beer foam would work more effectively than eyebrows, but I'm not sure if you're after a face , as well. Good luck.