dindah corporation

I'm not a fan of the typeface at all, its too harsh to look at. Also I think the leading should be expanded because the 't' and the 'i' characters in corporation are far too close to the 'a' in the first word. Personally I also think that the colours contrast too much and could do with being a little bit more.....mellow.

Hope this helped!

Unfortunately you are at this stage where you just stack up random stuffs. This is simply going nowhere.

You need to get back to the start. Get some inspiration from the web. In that regard, having a Pinterest account is a must. There are also a lot of sites for inspirations (logopond, dribbble, etc...)

You should also do some research, check out what the competitors do as far as brand identity is concerned. You need to pin the values that your client wants to convey through its logo. A good logo is never random.

Then, throw your mouse away and grab a pen and sketch a few hundred ideas. Only when you have something viable, you con proceed to execute it on Illustrator.

Good luck.