Epiphany House
whitneyg | Thu, 04/16/2015 - 04:56
Brief from client
A sober living facility focused on "active recovery." The client wanted a modern and clean logo. Needs to be flexible to include the "sober living" tagline or work without it.
Thanks in advance for any feedback!
Current logo can be seen here: http://epiphanysoberliving.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/01/12-19-2014-3-4...
3 Comments
I don't see how it relates to "sober" living. I think moving the "e" out of the symbol would improve it quite a bit, but it still doesn't look like a good fit IMHO.
I agree with genees on the "e". The way it's placed in the shape, it looses is identity as an "e", and I think as being the first letter, it's important to see it. Also, the kerning between the "e" and the rest of the letters appears to be bigger, maybe because of how the rest of the "e" is cut off? And the kerning on the "sober living" I'd like to see evened up a little more.
You should definitely keep the symbol and text apart.
Also, I like the three colors from the symbol, but can't find them in the type. Maybe try some versions with that pallet of colors.