Fazenda de Peixes
jorgekavicki | Mon, 04/08/2013 - 14:51
Brief from client
A sustainable that transmite the social responsability, in pisciculture.
I used to foward the client's brief, two fishes in a tie using eviroment colors, blue and green and a clean tipography.
1 Comments
Ouch my eyes! You might want to switch the jpeg to CMYK, so the colors aren't so flashy.
Globally, this is pretty bad. The symbol is really weird. I'm pretty sure I won't be the only one to say that, but it just looks like boobs. I'm not sure what the overlapping part is supposed to say, but it looks way too random.
The text part is too small compared to the symbol.
What are these margins doing here? Are they part of the logo?
Basically, this logo looks like it's been done a few minutes on MS Paint.
Keep posting your work, though, we'll be able to give you pointers. For this one, my advice would be to start from scratch and get as much inspiration as you can ( check www.inspirationfeed.com www.lookslikegooddesign.com www.losttype.com www.dribbble.com )
Good luck!