freelance logo çalısma
ceyhun12 | Wed, 02/08/2012 - 13:27
Brief from client
My freelance photography logo. Inspired by the "look at the birdie" phrase. Objective was to create something timeless, simple and classic. Also needs to work as branding on all styles of photography.
freelance logo çalısmam
5 Comments
Needs to be kerned better
I dont think the orange and teal are working together well
When you look at your logo as a thumbnail, you cant see the orange, So I would suggest getting rid of that second color
I dont think you need the dot above the I either because of the serifs you have
The font you chose is fine just needs to be tweek
The symbol is just to blan for me as well, it probably could work, but it seems like I have seen this idea done way to much
Josh was right: this logo does not offer any new. It doesn't mean it is wrong, it's average. Throw away the dot above the I. Modify it to monochrome.
My opinion is: you should create something new, something different than others to make a creative, good logo.
Besides the dot on the "i", that look terrible, there's nothing memorable in this design.
Reusing the symbol in the wordmark doesn't work. It's a case where repetition is done the wrong way.
The astigmatic "B" works as a very stony, cold, unattractive mark.
i like this idea and where you are heading. Polish it more and you will have a nice logo.
your idea is good but lots of work to fix.i agree with the above comment.