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creatomdesign | Fri, 04/26/2013 - 17:15
Brief from client
Fire extinguisher service: Client's demand is to make the logo attractive.
Uhm... this needs a bit of work.
Typography is fine, if a bit boring. Needs kerning tuning.
The symbol is kind of puzzling. Why wouldn't you make the F more obvious? And why just 2 spikes of what I would assume to be fire?
Go bigger, take a risk, make a "great ball of fire" if that's what you're going for. Like this it just looks a bit lazy.
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Uhm... this needs a bit of work.
Typography is fine, if a bit boring. Needs kerning tuning.
The symbol is kind of puzzling. Why wouldn't you make the F more obvious? And why just 2 spikes of what I would assume to be fire?
Go bigger, take a risk, make a "great ball of fire" if that's what you're going for. Like this it just looks a bit lazy.
I agree with venusasaboy. The idea beging the symbol is cool, ut you're not quit there yet.
Also the kerning. THE KERNING!!! =)
There's definitely potential with this logo. Good luck.
Thanks a lot for all your honest comments.I will definitely try to improve :)