Gourmet Bear
Animuz Design | Thu, 09/29/2016 - 16:51
Brief from client
making logo to sell on stocklogos.com
Rejected. Sorry, not accepted. We feel the logo is aesthetically not good enough. But this logo has potential.
I think the jar is more related to the bear then a cook hat. Stocklogs says it's better then my previous version but I need to work on it more. Thanks for giving me some feedback.
6 Comments
I like the idea, but I think the jar is a little too detailed. Try simplifying that and play around with the eyes, ears, and possibly adding a tail. Also, I think you should go with a different font. Best of luck
Well first off your font is, or closely resembles, comic sans (pause for look of horror on all graphic designers faces) so that needs to change. But your symbol is just a honey jar. And a bear. Oh, lets just call it honey bear. Ta-daaa!!! The jar reversed out of the bear doesn't fit in a clever way or actually create the bear's body- it simply is just a jar reversed out of a bear. You could literally replace that with anything- a coffee pot and call it coffee bear- and it would be the same thing (or a chefs hat....lol)
Sorry, but this doesn't work for me. Good luck.
To me it looks like that poor bear is being eviscerated.
And what that I see?!! Comic Sans? Is it ironic?
I think it looks kind of like the bear is being milked for the honey. I disagree with the previous comment that it's too detailed. I think that part is spot on. The jar needs to be in a different place.
Deberías probar con la tapa del tarro de miel de otro color para que no quede en negativo. También aconsejo trabajar más la sintesis de la cara del oso y cambiar totalmente la tipografía. Saludos!
- Jar's lid of honey in a different color so that it is not seen as negative image.
- More synthesis in bear's face.
- Change font at all
nice