Granite Guys
ErinsSonicYouth | Tue, 06/20/2017 - 21:24
Brief from client
This company is run by a couple of very chill men in the South, who do kitchen remodels. We wanted something bold, something that had either blue, blacks, or greys, and something that could easily be incorporated into a vehicle wrap. Draft #1!
7 Comments
This is looking pretty good to me! The only thing I'm not keen on is that both the men are exactly the same just flipped. Unless they are identical twins I would change up the 2 faces so that they look like the 2 men that run the company more.
I like what you did to the word granite, not sure if you need the black border and also i think the subtext might be a tad too small.
All in all, a bit more refinement needed
They definitely look a ton alike, its kind of silly, which is why I opted for the same face in two different colors. The only thing I might change is the hairline, one definitely has less hair than the other.
The border kind of reminded me of the long counter tops that are in most of the kitchens down here, I can show you a version with it removed.
Without the border.
Yea I think this works better and what you said about changing the hairline on one of the faces is a great idea.
I also prefer it without the rectangle border. Before the "guys" looked separated from the text. I agree just changing one of the guys a bit would help- I think twin brothers when they look identical. But otherwise, this is good work!
The name of the business makes it sound like they do countertops, not full on remodels. But, I am guessing you have nothing to do with the naming of the company.
I am going to buck the trend here. I work a lot with the building industry. Splitting the word Granite doesn't work for me. If I am going to work with a remodeler, I want their work to be polished and professional not jagged and split apart.
I know this is just me, though.
I think the graphic is perfect with the exception to the word Granite It really shouldn't be cracked. Kinda sends a bad message I was self employed for 30+yrs and found some things out the hard way. I did all my own graphics.
Anyways leave every thing the way it is. It's bold, clean and easy to read. Just change the word Granite so it's not cracked. Leave the rest alone it looks perfect.
Mike Moose Imperial Signs and Graphics