Same concept as before, but now we are in Texas.
First one without any real foliage, because well, Texas.
I love it! Neeearly perfect. Great color, the illustration is spot-on. Well balanced, solid composition. It's beautiful.
But you know me and symmetry. Under the mountain, the hill on the left is rounded, on the right it's straight. And the main text is a little out of center with the accent line between the words.
Other than that, you got this one down pat. Excellent.
^^^ what they said =)
And- I love the wolf- nice touch!!!
Those demon dogs are everywhere down here, but especially in Texas.
I'm on the fence about whether or not i'm fixing the roundness. I kinda like the asymmetry. But maybe making it straight would really make this a solid piece.
I DONT KNOW JOY.
yea...coyote...that's what I said, right??? lol oops =)
I shifted the roundness A TINY BIT.
But I like the way it leans into the mountain, the roundness of everything else helps it.
honestly, the shape of the mountains didn't concern me much- it was more the comment about alignment. It looks like your horizontal line between the name is not aligned center. I tend to kind of like the shape myself.
I liked it the original way. I think if you are going to try to straighten it out, either make it identical to the other side or not at all.
On top of all the above comments and suggestions want to say that when I looked at first - a giant hiking boot is what I saw with coyote and moon above.
Clearly, that's a hockey skate.
Clearly, Its the state of Nevada, plus a sword, a shield, and the pimple on a country mother's buttock.
Of course, I see it now. I can't believe I missed it.
but why would a WOLF be riding on a hockey skate??? ;)
I really hate how this website layout shrinks the comments to illegible response sizes as the comments build up.