Harvest Family Fest 2015
Gigafrost | Fri, 10/16/2015 - 22:13
Brief from client
Harvesty, clean, modern, kid friendly, family friendly, used to promote people to donate candy and come to the festival
Updated the kerning, changed the candy to be two toned, and showed the entire symbol to draw a little more attention. Also broke the bottom line a bit and added the year underneath so it looked less "heavy" with lines.
4 Comments
Great job
Great improvement since version 1!
This is working great overall. My only beef is with the placement of 2015. It's a bit too close from the word mark, screwing with the white space around it.
Good job nonetheless.
Excellent friend! I think you've reached the point in this version. A great improvement.
What another thing you could fine tune is the inner tip of swirl. Either it should be hidden behind the leaf or pop out of it more prominently, but right now it's kinda in between and creates a slight visual tension.
It's minor detail, but you know, the devil, blah blah blah =)