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Idea Cabin

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Indie game studio which creates games for Steam and VR headsets.

Indie game studio which creates games for Steam and VR headsets.

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xKillswitch's picture
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This seems a bit effortless, if I'm being honest.

First off, the "cabin" looks like a lazy house. I guess those scribbles are bushes? This needs an overhaul. Research images of actual cabins, and you'll notice a stark difference, and what defines them and differentiates them from houses.

The tilted pentagon and tilted words are both not working, either. There's no strong reason for either. Your font is very plain, and nothing really feels like it belongs together. Try to choose elements that go hand and hand with each other. The pentagon sort of makes sense with the basic shapes of the cabin, but as I've stated before, that doesn't make sense with the name.

Needless to say, this is underwhelming. I would go back to the drawing board and fill it with tons of sketches. Once you've developed some strong ideas, return to the cabin and flesh it out. But it kind of feels like the sketching phase was left out here.

Good luck.

Shawali's picture
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I wholeheartedly agree with Killswitch on this one.

You didn't spend a lot of time working on this, didn't use any proper creative process and it shows.

paintedjeff's picture
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yep, ditto on what they said. it's just a jumbled mess.

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