Israelsoul

Kerning is bad

Still Do not like the font

If you are going to do a solid black background then try a white, The grey is not bad just doesnt contrast enough for me.

Try adding a second color

Re work the dj, do something more creative right now this doesnt excite me where as a dj is suppose to be bringing the excitement

very forgettable. sorry.

What type of music does he spin? Maybe get inspiration there.

I have been listening to some deep house melodies and for what I have heard.I thing the idea is good. The music is smooth, a mix of funk, soul.

Perhaps a better font and execution would fix it. Removing the "dj" would be a good start.

I don't really like it. It's too busy. Add some white space.

Why are you insisting on this extremely ugly typography?
You don't know anything about letter spacing & kerning, about graphic composition, 'golden rule' and other beginner designer stuff. How do you think you will be able to pull this off?
Advice: Bookstore>books on graphics & logo design> study hard.