Jilal Graphics

I read "ilal Graphics"

-The lion's body and the lion's face don't match or something. It almost looks like it was a silhouette of a lion that someone cut the face out of and then replaced the face with some shoddy line work. If that was you, I apologize but it needs to be said! Speaking of the lion: just because you like lions (or even if you love them!) it doesn't necessarily mean that that's what you should choose to represent your business. It goes well with Africa, I guess, but you're not really knocking down the walls of creativity- you know what I mean? And if you DO stay with the lion idea, it needs a lot of work.

-The ...whatever the first letter of "ilal graphics"- (I cannot tell what letter that's supposed to be) is not working here. Is it a J? A V? In any case, I don't like the first letter nor do I think the rest of the text works. I don't like how far it's kerned out, and the first letter is too abstract and just doesn't look good.

I guess I'd go back to the drawing board if I were you. This looks thrown together and that lion either needs to be redone completely, gotten rid of altogether, or re-worked a LOT.

I don't mean to come off as harsh, I'm just being honest! Keep at it though and upload a new version when you can!!

Thanks for your feedback, really appreciated. I am uploading another version with minor changes and I say minor because I want to keep my beast hehehe...I am not using it only because I love lion but my name "Jilal" is very unique and strong name.