jvgraph
jvgraph | Wed, 11/16/2011 - 02:38
Brief from client
logo that represents me on all media in the field of graphic design.
This is my logo and would love to get some critics on it. I am an entry level designer with an AAS degree and working on my BA. I am planning to establish a good presence on the graphic design world.
7 Comments
need some feedback to work on my logo. thank you all
I can't do this anymore, sigh.
You have like 5 different graphic elements, all in different colors, 3 different line weights and a few huge gaps... do you really think this represents the pinnacle of you design skills and creativity?
If you do, you have a serious problem, if you don't... scratch this and start over.
But.... before you start working, invest some time into finding a good idea.
You want to represent yourself as a good designer but you won't make it if you don't have a good idea and skill to execute it in a professional way.
This logo shows you have neither.
thank you that's what I want it to see someone that tells me what's wrong with it, because i don't like it but most of my class mate and teacher told me that it was nice. thank you spashster
Thanks for understanding, my critique can sometimes look too harsh but, in my opinion, nothing makes people wake up better then a brutal slap.
If you are just starting, your teacher should have told you this too: start with a blank white paper and a pencil.
In this era of internet, fast computers and graphic design software people tend to jump over too many steps thinking they can pull it off because their parent or friends tell them they are 'talented' and they know how to draw a circle in Adobe .Illustrator and set a different font to the text.
Well, I can read "graphic design"... and at least that is in a simple font.
The rest, I have no idea what to make of. It's just not readable. Looks like a blueprint for a Calder piece. Simplify in every possible way.
Sorry, I would open up the sketch book.
Way too complex, too many elements and they don't make any sense together.
very simple and very beautiful :)