JZ Design Studio
Zelenkevicius | Tue, 12/18/2012 - 10:23
Brief from client
i made this logo for my company in a future.
Hi this is my first post and my first logo to your judgement.
This logo covers Letter J and Z as my initials.
2 Comments
imperial bird with broken leg
This might have been a great idea when you started out, and maybe it's still salvageable but this isn't working so far.
It's confusing, cluttered, and it's just... I think you should go back to the drawing board. One one hand, if you're trying to have it LOOK like a J and a Z, this fails because all I see is a small Z and half of an X and a wing and yada yada. If you're NOT trying to make it look like a J and a Z, this still doesn't work because it's just too confusing and my eyes are struggling to make sense out of it without any luck. (And it does look like an imperial bird with a broken leg....)
I think you should go back to said drawing board, and just think "simple" - pick a road to go down (either "It's gonna look like a J and a Z combined somehow" OR "it's going to technically be a J and a Z combined, but it won't necessarily look like it, it'll just look like a super awesome symbol".) and then go that route but keep it much more simple than the current design.
SOrry if that was too wordy!