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bekatayf | Fri, 07/13/2012 - 14:58
Brief from client
logo label on safe consumption, high quality production work for the competition
prepared in Turkish: writing quality in safe hands
Not good, not clear. first remove the black border or integrate it better. second the colours don't match, they are all too bright and not well composed (is ellerder linked with the two people? Thirds look at different fonts, this one has no character.
I guess the symbol could work - the kids holding the check marks that is - but I agree with geracao- it needs something, it almost seems naked. Also, the colors are pretty bad. If you HAVE to use those colors that's one thing, but if you can change the colors- by all means you should!
Also - is there a reason that only one of the words is capitalized? I'm not sure exactly what it says or of that K has to be capitalized but it kind of bothers me that only the one is capitalized. Seems like they should either ALL be capitalized, or none of them.
I'd either start over, or start with the kids holding the checks and go from there.
The colors are to bright, tone them back a bit.
At first the concept made no sense, but when I read the name it was like "ahh i guess that works"
I would change the font choice and why those colors and the one blue? does it represent girls n boys?
Nope, for anything in this one. it does not remember me of high quality, but cheap and screaming bright colors. You got to make less colors and not on fire. The symbols must be less and more expressive and with more individuality.
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I feel that it needs something else... its almost naked. Maybe some color on the square. And maybe a diferent font also.
Not good, not clear. first remove the black border or integrate it better. second the colours don't match, they are all too bright and not well composed (is ellerder linked with the two people? Thirds look at different fonts, this one has no character.
I guess the symbol could work - the kids holding the check marks that is - but I agree with geracao- it needs something, it almost seems naked. Also, the colors are pretty bad. If you HAVE to use those colors that's one thing, but if you can change the colors- by all means you should!
Also - is there a reason that only one of the words is capitalized? I'm not sure exactly what it says or of that K has to be capitalized but it kind of bothers me that only the one is capitalized. Seems like they should either ALL be capitalized, or none of them.
I'd either start over, or start with the kids holding the checks and go from there.
The colors are to bright, tone them back a bit.
At first the concept made no sense, but when I read the name it was like "ahh i guess that works"
I would change the font choice and why those colors and the one blue? does it represent girls n boys?
Nope, for anything in this one. it does not remember me of high quality, but cheap and screaming bright colors. You got to make less colors and not on fire. The symbols must be less and more expressive and with more individuality.