LMo Productions Golf Logo
Lemobley | Sun, 12/25/2011 - 00:08
Brief from client
Self promo for my Men's Golf Apparel.
Self promo for my Men's Golf Apparel/ advertisements for my Golf Tournament to raise awareness for men's Prostate Cancer. Several color schemes but i didn't upload them. The silhouette of the golfer was a picture of myself at the practice range. took the image into illustrator and outlined it as a vector.
6 Comments
Everything is crammed into the circle, and the circle isn't necessary. Colors aren't very appealing. Type looks odd with the smaller "o". Symbol could work if rendered better.
Simplify. This could be iconic like a Jordan logo.
Truly appreciate your feedback, I have a black silhouette and a white silhouette of this.
I will take your advice for font treatment, but I was trying convey "LMo" as L-Moe which happens to be my name in short... I have many versions and I don't want flood this site with them.
Jordan, WOW!!!! Well, back to the drawing board...THANKS MAN
Well, L-Moe looks more like a name. LMo looks like an acronym.
I would go with G's advice. That logo is cleaner, easier to remember and to embroider.
Jordan logo is a very good example, Jerry West is another.
I think it is possible to conclude the golfer in a circle, having cut out a silhouette from a circle, and more low your inscription. Only don't take a detour very big. Try to make an inscription in one line, an identical size. Colors it is really possible to try to pick up others.
lovely idea and its got potential....make a few more simple ones because there is a lot going on here and see what happens
Thank guys, appreciate the feedback...