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Thanks for the comment!

May I ask - what do you think about the screen facing this way, rather than right (as per the other version).

I concure with my esteemed colleague. I do like it too.

While there's nothing wrong with the main font, you want to fix the perspective that doesn't match the box.

The subtext is indeed too small and, worst of all, vertical. Pretty hard to read. I'd remove it altogether.

Good job.

Why not tilt the rectangle so the bottom is visible, and impose the subtext there? That way you avoid the sideways reading.

I like the perspective, it give an idea of grow up.
The "screen" type is to shy.