Logo for Esteban Lakatos

Okay, but you're not Esteban. Let him reach his own solution.

If you want my actual critique, it doesn't work at all. The twisting "L" looks unnatural and unnecessary. It also encourages the artist to continue with the standard initials+name format. We ought to encourage a unique composition and idea.

I also think your text appears tacked-on. The font isn't interesting, and it looks too spaced out. Text and symbol appear separated, not tied together somehow.

You know, I use this site only from time to time- when I need advice or criticisms to help my work. Which is what this site is for right? Considering I'm only here every once in a while, I'm amazed at how each and every time I get on here I leave absolutely frustrated by "CAMOBAP". What I gather is that he's amazed by the FEDEX logo negative space (because of course that is the only creative and clever logo that has ever been made right? ugh) and in his work continues to beat that dead horse repeatedly. Also, I find the above to be outright stealing! He also recreated one of my logos WITHOUT MY PERMISSION and did a horrible job at that! This is ridiculous and should be monitored! If you are only interested in slapping up half ass logos I'm guessing you spent 12 minutes making just for YOUR amusement- how in the hell are you helping anyone else???? For that matter- why continue to do so when others constantly tell you what not to do- or what to fix- and you completely ignore their advice and do it over, and over, and over and over and over and over again???
I apologize for the rant (to everyone else anyway) but seriously?? Now that I know I am not the only one who endured having their logo re-done without permission, I just couldn't tame my temper here!