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Logo JS Grafisch Vormgever
Jstelt | Tue, 04/05/2016 - 11:32
Brief from client
My name is Joyce van der Stelt. I am a secondyear student mediadesign. I hope you can give me some feedback on the logo I made for myself so I can make it better.
I like the idea of your appearance. But it looks like it is to much. Clearly you name jump out of the picture. But I don't understand the circle about everything and the thing above your initials. Further it is well conceived!
I like the graphical approach but I miss the idea. What's up with green 'roof' above your initials? It could be a sort of arrow up and down but that doesn't match with the circle. Do you realy need the circle?
I should work on it a bit more.
The typography is nice and simple. The readability is not good. Your name is on the left site but I read 'Joyce grafisch van der vorm stelt gever'. Maybe a different font and/or color will help to fix this problem.
2 Comments
I like the idea of your appearance. But it looks like it is to much. Clearly you name jump out of the picture. But I don't understand the circle about everything and the thing above your initials. Further it is well conceived!
I like the graphical approach but I miss the idea. What's up with green 'roof' above your initials? It could be a sort of arrow up and down but that doesn't match with the circle. Do you realy need the circle?
I should work on it a bit more.
The typography is nice and simple. The readability is not good. Your name is on the left site but I read 'Joyce grafisch van der vorm stelt gever'. Maybe a different font and/or color will help to fix this problem.