Logo creation for a company focused on graphic studio. Using colors and fonts that favor the brand. I created three models. This is model 02.
So I followed the tips and it was like this.
I see you also corrected some of the alignment problems of the earlier version, however you are still off with the ball/rule an MARCUS. The position of the A over the U with the add-on of the umlauts is very distracting to me, this would be a good place to concentrate and try to come up with a really creative solution, or eliminate MARCUS and just go with MULLER STUDIO. I like the M symbol, think the ball/rule doesn't really add anything. On the colors I think your gold went way too orange and over all the colors are too primary to convey the feeling of richness that your earlier brief described, I'd go deeper/earthier.
Thanks for the feedback. I will rethink the use of colors. I will also take this ball under the name MÜLLER and think of a way to solve the Ü.