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my logo
heshamfarghaly | Wed, 11/02/2011 - 16:02
Brief from client
Take Your Breath And I Draw Your Face , my page logo in the face book
Don't be discouraged, but I suggest you study Fortune 500 Brandmarks, get down the basics before you attempt to merge a face with a leaf and breath. And start out with a concise name, not a sentence, or you will end up with alphabet-soup.
I am with the others on this one... When you hit the drawing board, think a little more carefully about the typeface you choose and adding a stroke to type is not usually necessary. If you are looking to emphasis words like that, choose a typeface that has a bold and regular font.
Start over! Papyrus is like Comic Sans...bad. Simplify! The profile would be better without the eye and eyebrow, just the outline is interesting enough in my opinion. The leaf? What does it mean? What's its purpose? Is it a necessary element or "fluff"? Good luck!
9 Comments
bad name, symbol, type, and colors. take it from the top
I love how the face looks and the words flow into it.
I'm very sorry, but I hate everything about this logo. I agree with jderekhardin. Start over from scratch including the name.
Don't be discouraged, but I suggest you study Fortune 500 Brandmarks, get down the basics before you attempt to merge a face with a leaf and breath. And start out with a concise name, not a sentence, or you will end up with alphabet-soup.
You might also want to move away from Papyrus at all costs as you start over.
I am with the others on this one... When you hit the drawing board, think a little more carefully about the typeface you choose and adding a stroke to type is not usually necessary. If you are looking to emphasis words like that, choose a typeface that has a bold and regular font.
Start over! Papyrus is like Comic Sans...bad. Simplify! The profile would be better without the eye and eyebrow, just the outline is interesting enough in my opinion. The leaf? What does it mean? What's its purpose? Is it a necessary element or "fluff"? Good luck!
Well, in a world where everyone is a 'designer' everything is possible even calling this abomination a logo.
Lol.