PD (Pele Deer) Logo Design
Pele Deer | Sat, 05/31/2014 - 06:56
Brief from client
Personal logo design
Hi,
I am a freelance graphic designer, I'm currently revamping my branding and came across this forum, What do you guys think of my new logo? All constructive criticism is welcome and open to all suggestions.
Note: This is a quick mock-up of the general idea, need to clean up the edges etc.
Kind regards,
Pele D
2 Comments
Ohh, i don't know.....something very important is missing but i cannot tell what. I would say is lack of identity and dynamism and goosebumps need to be added. The whole thing going from the left to the right in horizontal and vertical lines is boring, go diagonal some, play with space and surfaces. This logo just looks good, and this is terrible.
Why not. It kinda looks like a paper clip. Maybe you could push this idea further. But I don't really see the D. And I don't really get the red bar on the left.
But right now, this is pretty bad, especially these messed up curves. As a freelance designer, you don't want your own logo to be half assed.
Good luck.