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Personal Logo

Brief from client 

Had a rethink of my personal logo (original in avatar) not thought about colour just yet. But will get round to it

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Shawali's picture
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I'd get rid of the subtext. The symbol ad the whole in and out of itself is self-explanatory.

CAMOBAP's picture
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I read FJ

Franklin Design's picture
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Edited it, looks more like a D now?

CAMOBAP's picture
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Now - it does, good recovery!

mahayni's picture
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Looks good to me, and now that Shawali mentioned it, I agree with what he said about the subtext

CAMOBAP's picture
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Looks fine. Symbol on its own can work, too. One of my idea here.

Franklin Design's picture
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https://www.behance.net/gallery/27655509/Franklin-Design-Brand-Guide

Done a quick guide based on the finished logo

CAMOBAP's picture
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Splendid job! Nice presentation and love that GasMonkey logo.

Cesardesign18's picture
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Excellent presentation, very nice.
Good job.

Franklin Design's picture
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CAMOBAP, I had the gasmonkey logo critique on this site a while back

http://www.brandsoftheworld.com/critique/gas-monkey-0

Glad you like it ;)

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Well done. Works on all levels for me.

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Looks great, my only suggestions are to expand the points on the top of the "A" so it is square and fits in with the other letters in "Franklin" a bit better and also to put design next to franklin bigger instead of underneath it. Make "Franklin" bold and "Design" a smaller weight. The way the three elements interact is a bit off and I think that would fix it. Otherwise, good job!

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simple but nice one!

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