Brief from client
This is a logo I've been sketching for a while, I'm a beginner at design etc, would love some feedback/ideas to maybe make it better. Cheers
really simple logo, no fancy stuff as it's just a personal logo for my music "career"/brand
3 Comments
I'm not really sure what that symbol is supposed to be, but it's fair to say it doesn't look very appealing. To put it crudely, it kinda looks like a turd ;)
What was your initial idea behind it?
Keep sketching (on paper!) to refine your idea.
I like the kinda plain font. I'd give it a bit more distressed feel. I imagine the kind of stencil logo you usually find of gear crate of a touring band.
Keep it up!
The symbol is supposed to be a cloud, I didn't wanna have the text alone as it looked too simple/plain. Any idea on what to add as a complement to the text? What if i replace the symbol with a proper looking cloud?
Yes. Just rework on the cloud itself. Here, it's too crudely done. Don't hesitate to sketch some ideas on paper until you find something cool.