Brands of the World™ an All Creative World site
Brands of the World is the largest free library of downloadable vector logos, and a logo critique community. Search and download vector logos in AI, EPS, PDF, SVG, and CDR formats. If you have a logo that is not yet present in the library, we urge you to upload it. Thank you for your participation.

PGDCommunity.com

owenjsutton | Sun, 02/03/2013 - 05:40

Brief from client 

Didn't do so well with you guys last time. Here's another (better) version.

2 Comments

saraqroxy's picture
165 pencils
saraqroxy | Mon, 02/04/2013 - 17:27

I think I remember your last version, and while this is an improvement- I don't think it's there yet. Some things to possibly consider:

-The gradient in the main text- I'm fairly sure that I can safely say it's almost never a good idea to have a gradient on any text- let alone the main text. (It looks like a gradient might also have been applied to the subtext- take that out too!)

- Is this logo for a website and a website only? If not, then the ".net" should be removed.

- The symbol is okay I guess, but it's SO thin and so small! It also looks like a DNA strand- is that intended? If you could up the size of it and make it a more prominent part of your logo, it might work better.

- Last thing, the font. I'm not a huuuuuuge fan of the font you've selected for the main text- it strikes me as a little too thin. Maybe play around with a few others!? And while you're playing around with stuff- what about changing up the arrangement of the symbol and the text? Maybe have the text below the symbol- that way the symbol could potentially be larger.

owenjsutton's picture
owenjsutton | Tue, 02/05/2013 - 01:45

The DNA look is on purpose (PGD is a genetic test)... I really appreciate your input, you can expect a new and hopefully improved version very soon. Thanks again. OJS

Version history

  • Version 1

    • I No votes yet.
    • S No votes yet.
    • T No votes yet.
    • C No votes yet.