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Pink_Slice

Brief from client 

Client wants a logo for an online pastry business.

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JNF Design's picture
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I really like the idea of this. The one thing that instantly jumps out to me is the negative space in the bottom of the K. It doesn't look like the line aligns with the top. I wonder what it would look like if that space was a perfect triangle or if the line was aligned.

M@'s picture
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Hey there, you have a really good idea here but the execution doesn't live up to it unfortunately... You need to take this the next level.

I'm really sorry if me doing a take on your logo upsets you but I think it may help you think about developing your idea further and help you to create a better logo. It's also saves me writing a huge paragraph on things you could do to improve this so here it is!

Now I by know means want you to copy this but I want you to understand how you can take an idea that you came up with and develop it further into something much nicer and better suited for a logo design.

Good luck!

unterm rad's picture
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Pink Slice is traditionally cut into squares, isn't it?

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