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PIZZICA

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Shawali's picture
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Ouch, this is a mess, sorry. Way too many things happening at once.

The totally random woman silhouette, the hand, the pepper and the flames... Overabundance of symbols, you got to get rid of all but one.

These stroked doodles look really out of place. This and the uncomplementing subtext font kill the graphic consistency of your logo.

To make it short, you got to seriously simplify.

seridea's picture

IN ITALY It's different, couse Pizzica is a dance like tarantella, but pizzica is also the hot taste of the pepper and pizzica means also pinch, the woman silouette is a dancer. In that food house you can dance the pizzica, eat hot, and there is some... ambiguity, that the atmosfere. tanke you. About colours green, red and white are italian flag color, sorry but you can' t understand italian style

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I'm sorry to report that I don't see anything good happening here.

The weird green stroke around the main text is a bad idea, I can barely tell what the symbol to the left of the P is (a woman, apparently), I don't understand the red loop of the P being an arm/hand- and is it picking the woman's butt or something!?, I don't get what the three little things over the 'ca' are or why they're there, and then we have the pepper being an i- which might be the least offensive piece of clip art but it has a dot over it! Is the original 'i' still hanging out behind the pepper or something?

I also wouldn't use that font for the main text- it looks rather Irish to me (or at least the 'c' sure does) - and the subtext is just a boring italic font.

I'd think about just starting over from scratch. And please, if you're going to use illustrations, make it just one and make it a NICE looking one! No more wobbly little stroke lines!

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Pizzica is a dance like tarantella, but pizzica is also the hot taste of the pepper and pizzica means also pinch, the woman silouette is a dancer. In that food house you can dance the pizzica, eat hot, and there is some... ambiguity, that the atmosfere. tanke you.

seridea's picture

IN ITALY It's different, couse Pizzica is a dance like tarantella, but pizzica is also the hot taste of the pepper and pizzica means also pinch, the woman silouette is a dancer. In that food house you can dance the pizzica, eat hot, and there is some... ambiguity, that the atmosfere. tanke you. About colours green, red and white are italian flag color, sorry but you can' t understand italian style

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I thought it was spicy arab food...
I am still not sure if it means pizza...or something like pizza-related fussion cuisine . but let me tell you this: the P is hideous, it does no t work like a letter and all the suplementary graphics are not well combine.

seridea's picture

IN ITALY It's different, couse Pizzica is a dance like tarantella, but pizzica is also the hot taste of the pepper and pizzica means also pinch, the woman silouette is a dancer. In that food house you can dance the pizzica, eat hot, and there is some... ambiguity, that the atmosfere. tanke you.

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