Poli Vision
roni paganini | Tue, 02/17/2015 - 20:58
Brief from client
the client requires a simple logo unifiyng the first letters from brand name, with the letter "v" performing a checked simbol.
colors usade are client preferences.
its a signage solutions company, so i decide to use a form of pencil countour to create the first letters and use a simple style of fonts to compose the rest of idea.
the colors are client preferences and aplication envolve company cars, visit cards and other situations.
6 Comments
Sorry, but the the way you formed P is a stretch. I attempted to read it as "Voli" and "Doli" first, before giving up and reading your title. I think the V is a bit too big, but it provides a nice stark contrast to the black. However, will this work on a white background, I wonder? I'd like to see that in the next version. Lime green on white works sometimes, but not usually.
I honestly did know if that was a "D", "P" or something else for the top part. A little confusing. But I like the idea. Just needs tweaks.
I too can't see for the P. I read "oli vision". This idea doesn't work, unfortunately.
guys, I appreciate the consideration and tried to review the concepts according to the counsel of you. preferred not move the idea originally conceived and ended up sending my client this proves that you are seeing. He approved and enjoyed it.
I do not think I will change more and thank others for help.
I was going to suggest moving "Poli" to the same line as "vision," and drop the orange "P".
much more readable than your first version