Port Jeff Massage

Get rid of the whole symbol and that terrible looking subtext and you'll have something to build up from.

The total absence of ligatures is hurting my eyes =)

Sorry, but you should start from scratch. The colors are wrong for this type business. The font on top is hard to read, and the font below with the hands is really hard to read. The hands are confusing, they are overlapping the leafy thing plus they don't look like letters at all. Do some research on other spa-like businesses and come back with a clear head. Good luck.

To add to what's already been said, that symbol has been recylced for spas so many times. A local business here in town uses that same lotus flower shape, as well as several other companies after doing a quick Google search. Refresh your look.

The script type is hard to read, I nearly have to tilt my head to read it at a weird Angle. Also one thing to never do is track and separate script type. When we write scripts we don't separate the letters of each word, we write them as if they are connected.

I would probably say lose the circle, and maybe just use a simplified lotus I don;t think you need that many petals. Maybe place the flower in the upright position instead of tilting it and placing the text on bottom or placing the flower to the left of the text.

If you want to incorporate something with hands maybe incorporate that with a figure of a body like line art or something and someone massaging the person. OR you could draw hands with line art wrapping about the flower. Right now it looks like you're massaging the flowers rather than an actual body. Hope this helps!