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Powerful Promo
tfciti | Wed, 06/07/2017 - 21:40
Brief from client
Client would like a logo expressing the promotional items he sell for custom imprinting
This has good potential! I think you should try overlapping the red circle in front of P and W, so you can do the same with the white circle- that way it would be implied without needing that line underneath.
I'm perplexed about the tagline- it feels a little tacked on at the moment- find a better placement/size/etc. for it and I think you will have a pretty good logo.
I really enjoy that you used a minimal, bold type for this logo. Red and black are also super classic and tend to get the point across in a "powerful" way. So good job on that.
As far as the tagline, I think the most simple solution to that is to just make it a tad bigger. That way, it really amplifies the staggered type treatment you have going on, and fits that neat little box area better.
well I just had to google who Zero was...lol and no, I don't see him or a snowman here! Maybe it's an optical illusion, but is your red circle larger than the white? Feels like the red overlaps more, and I think if the white overlapped just a bit more it would hold up better??? You may just need to play around with it a bit. But its improving for sure! =)
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This has good potential! I think you should try overlapping the red circle in front of P and W, so you can do the same with the white circle- that way it would be implied without needing that line underneath.
I'm perplexed about the tagline- it feels a little tacked on at the moment- find a better placement/size/etc. for it and I think you will have a pretty good logo.
I really enjoy that you used a minimal, bold type for this logo. Red and black are also super classic and tend to get the point across in a "powerful" way. So good job on that.
As far as the tagline, I think the most simple solution to that is to just make it a tad bigger. That way, it really amplifies the staggered type treatment you have going on, and fits that neat little box area better.
Otherwise, good job.
Thank you for your critique. So I removed the tagline and brought the circles to the front. Does it look too much like a snowman?!
....oh no, now I'm seeing Zero from Nightmare before Christmas.
I really like the red circle being in front of P and W though. I could just be seeing things, because I think it looks cool.
well I just had to google who Zero was...lol and no, I don't see him or a snowman here! Maybe it's an optical illusion, but is your red circle larger than the white? Feels like the red overlaps more, and I think if the white overlapped just a bit more it would hold up better??? You may just need to play around with it a bit. But its improving for sure! =)
I saw it because of the pointy white snout and the big red nose.
But like I said, I think I'm seeing things, because it still looks cool. And I agree, I don't see a snowman at all.
Lookit that dumb nose.
ah I see. I have never seen Nightmare Before Christmas (I know I know I'm prob the only one on the planet...lol)
Joy, you gotta fix that. How can I make silly pop culture references in critiques if nobody else laughs?