My idea is to show something beautiful. I do not want a common logo as the other ... I want an artistic impression. Anything solid colors and not aligned. That is, a layout artist on the Internet.
Can you understand that?
Why is the person on the left blowing rainbow snot all over the logo?
Sorry, I don't see anything beautiful here, just a head figure spewing rainbow mucus from it's nose.
If you don't have a good idea to back it up, there is nothing special about rainbow colors splash. Typography used for RAPHAEL is more suited for a church logo, although I have to admit that small tagline typography looks good.
Right now it looks like a person breathing out the rainbow. It's creepy. Get a simpler and more clear idea.
Search for the idea, do not stick to your type of creation, every place has a different kind of creation. I consider not only our profession like any other job ... have to be different and make a difference. I run a basic and simple concept that people do. this is art my friend!
I know I'm still not great, but it's my way of working. I see that you criticize based on just one concept. give a sharp in his artistic vision.
I see that the experience of the staff is very good, but the concept is pretty weak ... when it comes to art, we can not hold many things, the name is already clear ... art: idea, creativity, non-standard!
I agree with you. If you see this as an art piece, then it is an art piece. Then it is free to mean something different to everyone, and we shouldn't be judging it as a graphic design logo identity.
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