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Poeshh | Tue, 01/06/2015 - 11:53
Brief from client
Hello, I'm a graphic designer and here is my logo. I've made so many logo's for myself but I'm never satisfied. Maybe you guys can take a look for some tips. I have something with triangles, don't know why.
9 Comments
I agree with Shane. Looks fine but the cropped out G et R make the subtext read "raphic designe".
You can easily extend those letters too without losing your visual effect. No one's going to take a ruler and check to see if it's a perfect triangle :)
Thanks all for the feedback. I extended the letters and chopped less off the G and R so its better readable. The font i used was Avioflex-Bold.
Sorry, by extend the letters, I meant to reduce or eliminate the slants. The size they were at before was much better.
Either do that or increase the triangle size a notch or two.
You could use the full text of Graphic Designer by reverse it in a box with slant edges to match the top triangle. You would probably have to enlarge to top triangle to hold balance..something like this...just a thought.
Thanks, this is what I have now. One with and one without the slants. Cooperads that one is also a good idea, but for me it doesn't work. But thanks :).
For me, you're better off without the slants. They don't really serve any purpose and are gimmicky at best.
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