residential project
Abbas Naqvi | Tue, 06/11/2013 - 14:57
Brief from client
Client is to launch a high end residential project in downtown later this year. It's a one penthouse per floor development, very exclusive with each floor being about 7 thousand feet. Therefore the name needs to be catchy and good.
30 Comments
love it, great job!
Simply and clear. Very good!
It reminds me one of mine:). The LE look lived apart. Try one other solution.
agreed... can you share me to what you are referring to ?
Hmm maybe take the same space between the letter, u give the Idea with the big L and M an the others lowercase. Without making nothing in bold :) it will damage the balance
Maybe Put "LE" in bold, andtogheter to the "Maison", yet respecting the kerning,
Anyway... it's a good job!
I think the M could move just slightly to the right, it seems as though the kerning is just a tad off there. Overall, it looks very nice.
nope i think the problem is the line that make that visual problem. It must be be longer (or not) jut in centre of the M and the final N
Amazing.
(Agreeing with jim@zgraphics.com) Only critique I have is moving the M to the right and fixing the kerning. Other than that great job, love the vector and colors .
Hey! nice job, i agree with the rest of the guys, you should reduce kerning with the same space between the S O and N for all the other letters.
I agree that the kerning should be looked at but I like the spacing you already have between the SON, so I would match that spacing the the rest of the letters... Also is the curve under the O supposed to be a sky line or represent the setting sun over the ocean? if so, i would consider a blue instead of purple.
Great. I love it.
Nice job!
I like the simplicity and smoothness of it, I also like the choice of colors.
I agree with what said about the LE being lefted away, maybe you can work out the kerning and spacing.
Just a suggestion, have you tried moving the birds to the other side, I have a feeling that could be good for balancing the logo mass - thinking aloud.
another thing. Do you really thing you need those birds there? dont you think u perfectly give the idea without those 2? Couse it make a three element + text logo when you dont need it. Just an idea, if the client or you like them dont worry they dont realy damage the logo but think it will be much much beter and much direct as a concept :)
another thing. Do you really thing you need those birds there? dont you think u perfectly give the idea without those 2? Couse it make a three element + text logo when you dont need it. Just an idea, if the client or you like them dont worry they dont realy damage the logo but think it will be much much beter and much direct as a concept :)
I like it! the look gives you a good mood of relaxation, that's a good thing. But also, the logo gives you the idea of a penthouse with a great view and i don't know how good is the view in downtown were the construction will be, but on a beach would be great:) overall, great work
nice job!
I thank you all my friends and i will make the changes is per your suggestions and will upload soon.
nice. but is this place close to the sea? if not, I'd think about losing the birds, they look like seagulls a little to much and remind me of the ocean.
I wish you good luck.
Yes Drag, the place is close to the see.
Nice job.
But tell your client that it's should read LA maison and not LE maison. It's a feminine word.
Thanks Shawali... defiantly i will inform him :) ..
isn't it Le Maison more than one?
I mean La maison/ the house , Le Maison/The Houses ?
Or am I mixing my french with my italian?
Yes Venusasaboy this is more then one ...
That's a great work but the colors could be better.
good
I love the logo but one thing catches me. You said this is a downtown development and the birds give me more of a waterfront feel unless, of course, this development is in a waterfront city. Great job.
Excellent job. Definitely looks like something I'd buy. You nailed this one.
Great job with this one!!